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Hello A,

Thank you for your new submission !

To be honest, a lot of people really like this, we are sorry to say however that the current design is not what we are looking for.

This design is very cute, and we are aiming for a more elegant appearance.

We like the idea of it being one color and we think that your solution of putting the text in bold will make the company name more legible even in small iterations.

One interesting omission is the absence of an intercultural element. As the sphere that was "the planet" in your previous submissions now seems to be "just" a circle. This is not a deal breaker by any means just something that we noticed and found mention worthy.

Again, we really like the design but it is not for our intents and purposes.

Thanks again !

M.

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Hello,

thanks for your feedback.
There is only one ribbon left, and it is less large than before.
I think we should keep this idea with the ribbon which describes well your activity immigration/emigration from A to B.

Please let me know what your thoughts are.

Best,

A

Dear A.

Thanks for your kind reply and new submission!

The new logo is a big improvement over the first.

We agree with you that the ribbon is a good indication for our immigration and emigration activity however we do so much more and would therefore not emphasize on a particular activity on our logo. I think the overall design would be best served by removing the ribbon(s) altogether.

We think that the emphasis should rather be put on interculturality so the sphere is one way to do that but in the current form we would like to see a little more in that regard.

Please note that the logo will be printed in different sizes and that it is important that the company name can still be read in it's smaller forms. We do enjoy the typography and the way it is presented.

Please do not hesitate to ask if you have questions or comments.

Best,

M.

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Hey Logoman,

Thank you so much for participating in our competition.

The idea of "ribbons" envelopping a sphere is nice. We feel that it has the potential to convey the message that we are aiming for. We do feel however that the ribbons on the current design may be a tad prominent, read large.
Maybe it would be more elegant if the ribbons were thinner and more transparent (maybe just a line) for one and maybe less dark underneath. Given that the logo will feature in all sizes on different types of documentation, we are under the impression that the dark underlying of the ribbon might make the logo like as if it has lumps.
The question has also been asked whether it is possible to readjust the positioning of the ribbons in such a way that : 1 the "arrow" points upwards, the impression we got is that it looks as if it points downward.
2 something about the ribbons be it the positioning, the width is offputting. Maybe readjusting their size will help or readjusting how they envelop the sphere...

Even though we market to businesses and private individuals, we do aim for a corporate looking logo and general consensus was the name above the sphere in this representation feels too playful.
Perhaps it would look better if the letters are black? or otherwise represented entirely differently.

We are very much looking forward to a new submission. Do not hesitate to contact us for questions and comments !

All the best,

M.