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How about this brother?

Yes! Better :)

Thankyou. some day we hope can design your car :)

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Very cool design, much better than previous ones. Thank you!

Hi Groenpand Team.

I am very enthusiastic about your contest. can you give any suggestions so that this design will not only be cool, but be perfect!

Kind Regards,
Mayesha

Hmm, tough question! You could try to reduce the white outline effects. Although that might mean you have to edit some of the colors or the design to ensure there's still enough contrast and the readability doesn't suffer.

I will do it!
What I have to reduce is the white line effect
on the text, or on the car body?

Preferably the text wouldn't have an outline at all. If it helps you can invert the logo to white (on the front of the van for example).

How about this?

Organic Van Design. How about this?

Definitely an improvement on the last one in terms of design, but it doesn't really feel like it has anything to do with making residential/office buildings more sustainable. It could just as well be a soda company (due to the bubbles).

Hi Groenpand Team.

My name is Mayesha, how about this design? please give me feedback. Thanks

Regard,
Mayesha

I'm definitely getting the "organic" vibe, but perhaps you went a little overboard with the shapes. Sometimes less is more. Some of the colors are a little too saturated (almost neon-like) as well.