Het begon allemaal met een idee...

Good evening ;)
Attached you find the changes according to your feedback.
Kind regards, dagmar

Hi Raoul,
I found your facebook and wordpress sites ;) So here are the changes you requested, I also added the two web adresses to the letterhead and invitation card. If you should prefer one of the two other color variations I included, I can change the stationary accordingly, just let me know.

have a nice sunday, kind regards, Dagmar

Hey Dagmar, Thank you for the additional colors. I like the first one, can you work that one out on the staionary? You can leave out the blog page, it is a bit too much and also the landline phone number on the paper can be scrapped.

Hi Raoul,
thank you for your feedback ;) This color combination wasn't my favorite either, but if it helps you to figure out, which one you like best, it's good that you've seen it.
I made another version of my initial idea, using the image sign inside an icon, so it might be better for social media or for using it as a favicon.

The color combination I used in this design, is one of my favorites, so maybe you like it. I detached the slogan from the logo to use it separatly on letterhead, invitation & business card.

Looking forward to your reply,
kind regards, Dagmar

Hello Dagmar, very nice changes! I likte it that you have put the logo in an icon, I would like to use the logo seperate. I'm doubting a bit about the color, I like the initial light blue but that is maybe to light, thisblue I find a bit dark. I like the light blue because it stand outs and gives a more positive feeling. Could you show me a color in between? And can you change the business card for me? Thank you.
Kind regards,
Raoul

Good morning Raoul,
I will show you some more blue color variations today, so we can figure out your favorite colors ;) Are there any specific changes you want concerning the business card, or do you just want to see variations of the layout?

Until later, kind regards, Dagmar

Looking forward to the blue variations. Can you remove adress information and telefone (you can keep mobile) on the business card and add facebookpage and maybe blog page?

Sure ;) Do you already have the web adresses for blog and facebook, or shall I just use a placeholder?

Good morning Raoul,
attached a version in the colors you proposed... If you like it, I will set up the according housestyle with the business card changes you requested.
Kind regards, Dagmar

Good Morning DAgmar, Thank you for the changes. I have not been clear to you about the colors. I was wondering how it would look like if the two light blue sides of the M's would look in different colors, to choose which color would be the best. Seeing the different colors, I do prefer the original light blue one.

For now your design is clear to me. It is one of my favorites. I will get back to you by the endo of the competition.

Kind regards,

Raoul Vries

Hi Raoul,
attached a revision of the first proposal with a black/blue color combination and a first layout for an according housestyle.
Kind regards, Dagmar

Your design is looking good. I would like to see my sloagan on the backside of the business card, apart from the name and the logo instead of the front side. Can you remove adres information and Telefone on the business card and add facebookpage and maybe blog page? I'll think about the colors.

I have thought about the colors, I would like to see how a darker blue, a light green (not poison green), and purple would look like.

sehr schön gemacht.

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Erg mooie verwerking en vertaling van Moedige Mannen in het beeldmerk, de dubbele M die ook een man vormt die tegen twee zijden drukt. Ook mooie en strakke lettertype.

Hello Raoul,
thank you very much for your positive feedback and rating ;) Is there any special color combination you'd like me to use for the design or do you like the blue color combination?
Kind regards, Dagmar