Het begon allemaal met een idee...

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Thanks! I like the rounder "P" the best. Hopefully you understood my ealier comment?

Thanks!

I understand clearly your feedback and I prepared the proposition for you: the logo of the first proposition and the text of this last one... unfortunatelly the contest ended and I'm not able to upload.
i don't if I will win or not, but in case i will win i will provide to you the logo with the last mdification you required me.

Best regards,
Amilcare.

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Bedankt voor dit gouden alternatief!

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Bedankt voor dit alternatief! De vorige optie heeft duidelijk mijn voorkeur.

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rendering is hier geweldig! Precies de uitstraling die ik zoek

Sorry, saw you were from Italy. Here's my English feedback.

The logo is superb. This can be used both in black and in white goods . I like the font, but i'd prefer it not to be Italic. The placement and size of the words are perfect.
Only the "P" in the logo is a bit too angular for me.
Hope to see an update, this is my favourite so far!

Thanks!

Thanks a lot for your positive feedback on all my propositions.

I usually show the rendering on "real" paper or other support because give the right idea of what the client can expect when he will print or stick somewhere... I'm happy you appreciate.

I posted the new logo whit the changes you required, but I'm not pretty sure of what you ask me regarding the "p" in the logo. What do you mean when you write "a bit to angular"? ...it means "Italic"?

thanks also for your translation in english... I was trying to translate with google but the tranlsation was not properly useful! :)

If is ok for you, I will not post other rendiring because each designer has limited possibility (we can send only 15 propositions)... maybe, asking to the Brandsupply team, they will un-block the limit, but anyway i can post still other 7 proposals... so it is early to be worried.

Let me know if you want any other changes, I will upload today in order to give you the opportunity to receive before the ending of the contest.

BR,
Amilcare

Well the "P" in the logo isn't round enough. It does not really fit the roundness of logo. I like the logo in your first design the best, there, the "P" had the same roundness as the logo.

Thanks!

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Het logo is super. Deze is zowel op zwart als op wit goed te gebruiken. Het font zou ik graag niet cursief zien en de "P" in het logo vind ik iets te hoekig. Wel mooie plaatsing can de letters. Wellicht is er een font wat tussen deze en degene die je eerder gebruikte font in zit?

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Ziet er geweldig uit, dank je wel

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Hartelijk dank je voor je inzendingen.

Het logo vind ik fantastisch. Alleen het font wat minder. Ik zag dat je bij de latere inzendingen dit al veranderd hebt. Ook erg mooi dat je verschillende voorstellingen gemaakt hebt, dat geeft een goed beeld hoe het ontwerp er "in het echt" uitziet.